Reviews

We have started our writing in Room 14 this year learning how to create a concise review. So far we have reviewed the layout of our room, a really good book 'Edward the Emu' and a very funny advertisement. Here is a selection of our best writing. Read and enjoy. :-)

**Room 14 Design Review** ** M **** o **** vement Around the Room ** There is not very adequate room around the desks. I think we should get rid of the extra whiteboard for more room to move. There is sufficient room to get work done in the activity corners and they have useful information. ** Aesthetics ** The room has a combination of many colours which makes it very attractive and eye-catching. I think we could have less people or get rid of spares or extra things. // By Alex Year 6 //
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** Edward the Emu ** Author Sheena Knowles, Illustrated by Rod Clement The story takes place at the zoo where there are lots of animals you can see. The main character in the story is Edward the Emu. The story is about Edward the Emu who can’t decide what animal he wants to be. The story ended with Edward overhearing someone say “The Emu’s are the best by far” and he goes back to be an Emu again but someone has taken his place, though luckily they turn out to be friends. I like this book because it has lots of rhyming words. This book is a good book for all ages. I rate this book a 5/5 because it teaches you a life lesson. ** Review written by Grace Year 6 **
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 * __ Nolan’s Cheddar Cheese Advertisement Review __**

__ Product to buy __ The product to buy in this advertisement is Nolan’s amazingly, super strong cheddar cheese. __ Setting/Scene __ The setting/scene in this advertisement is a mouse that isn’t very strong. He gets super strong by eating some cheese though…….. __ Main Character __ The main character in this advertisement is the not very strong mouse that isn’t very smart or athletic. __ Short Summary __ This advertisement is about the small, not very smart mouse. He finds a mousetrap and starts nibbling the cheese. He doesn’t know that the cheese makes you super strong. Before he realises he gets snapped. He thinks it’s the end but it isn’t and he starts pumping. __ Target Audience/ Appeal __ This advertisement would be suitable for all ages. There are no words so you wouldn’t have to read. This way anyone can watch it. I liked it because it was humorous and enjoyable. The music fitted in perfectly. I rate it 10/10. I could watch it all day.

Review created by Lucy Year 6 Here is the ad we reviewed. Thanks Lucy W for sending us this link. :-) media type="youtube" key="Plz9JxsnhH4" height="340" width="560"